Consultation

Lebenslauf & Motivationsschreiben Review

A focused critique of your existing German application documents with line-level edits and rewrite suggestions.

Many strong candidates lose interviews because their Lebenslauf follows an international CV layout or their Motivationsschreiben reads like a university personal statement. This review service isolates those problems. We comment on photo conventions where relevant, date formats, Praktikum placement, and how to name German qualifications so Ausbildungsbetriebe can scan them quickly.

Who it is for

Applicants who already drafted materials and need a Germany-specific editorial pass

What you walk away with

Marked-up documents plus a short memo on tone, structure, and gaps hiring managers notice

How the work unfolds

  1. 1
    Upload

    Send your current files and the trade you are applying for.

  2. 2
    Editorial pass

    We review structure, German phrasing patterns, and claim-to-evidence balance.

  3. 3
    Return package

    You receive annotated originals and a revised draft to adapt.

Included

  • Review of Lebenslauf and one Motivationsschreiben
  • Inline comments and a cleaned rewrite suggestion
  • Checklist of missing attachments typical for Ausbildung Bewerbungen

Not included

  • Writing documents from a blank page
  • Company research beyond notes already in your draft

Preparation

PDF or Word files, plus the exact Ausbildungsberuf title if known.

Practical constraints

One revision cycle is included if you return questions within five days.